Tuesday, May 10, 2011

The Capture

Jack couldnt sleep thinking how big would that treasure be. 'I will be rich really soon and i would buy alot of things haha" jack said. As he was fallling asleep he heard someone talking to him in the window. He got really scare, his mind though of the old man he found in the woods. GET AWAY WHO IS IT!! loudly jack scream. The next day arrive, jack pack himself food and  drinks and his gold detector. He was nervous and little scare but he didnt care he follow his path to the woods. He got to the woods as he got in everything got dark, weird things were happening every single animal stare at him birds, rabbits, bats. The trees were blowing off and shaking their braches really fast. "whats going on omg" jack screaming got out. I relate this same passage with another movie i`ve seen before the protagonist confronts weird things that does not have an explanation.

Wednesday, May 4, 2011

The Capture

In the searching of his treasure Jack's gold detecter detected something in the ground cover with grass. Jack amazingly exicted was digging inside and uncovering the ground to see what was in the ground. unfortunaly he didint find anything valuable just a cap or coke. His friend started laughing " Jack give up we will never gonna find anything valuable, who do you think hide his gold in here". Jack pist and mad kept looking ingnoring his friend. As the afternoon came everything wa getting dark, the animals were running to his caves and up the trees to thier houses. The chilly breeze was cold. Lets go bryan will come to more early and search again for this gold that for days am thinking in find. But tomorrow will go even deeper inside no matter whats there. that old man does not know what he is talking about how can someone die. And those skeletons hanging are just halloween decorations.

Thursday, April 28, 2011

The Capture

Jack and his friends got into the forest..  There eyes got wide open when they saw two skeletons hanging in the branch of a tree..on of his friend John ran outside and told Jack he gave up.. Jack was scare too but his desire to find a treasure was greater than his fears. As he kept walking he was hearing some strange noises and some one appear!!! it was an old man really old. he told him that bieng alone in the "Dead Forest" was really danger. Many peoppe that enters here never get out or they get out  tramatize!!! Jack was confused but didnt believe and he took his intrument gold detecer and kept seraching for the treasure.. I think i would never do that and even more if someone appear and tell me those scary things!!. I think Jack is so brave and his greediness for money is enormous!!..

Friday, April 22, 2011

The Capture

So far this book is really interesting. Its about a group of young peolpe who went to the mountians to discover treasure that has being hiden in the woods for years and that no one has foun it. Jack the main character had this idea that had been stuck in his brian for almost a year. He thought he could find that big treasure of dead rich people that during the war they had to hide iti n the woods. I connect this story with myself because when i was little i always wanted to find a treasure, i wanted to go into the woods and search for one. I always wonder how cool will be discoverying someone elses money. Furthermore i connected it to the story that my grandma told me that rich peole had to hide their gold in the woods because soldiers came to take all their money when the revolutionary war in Mexico was on. So Jack convince his other friends so finally the friends accepted the proposal. They prepare themselves with lanterns and food and head their way to the forest. When they got to the forest they saw everything so lonely, just birds and animals crying and running. Jack was amaze but his friends were kind of scare like backing up and not liking that idea no more. I think i would feel the same way like his firend felt because no matter how much you would want something it would be so scary to get into the woods and search for a treasure where its lonely and scary.

Thursday, March 17, 2011

Living Fishers!!

Laura was sad of loosing her friends but a they valued their religion she was goignt to value her. She thought she was a grown up girl and that she could find her way her self. She was confident to do things on her own. When she went to pick up the mail in the morning she hear a whistle, onher mind she thought of her friends btu when she turned around it was a good looking boy. He introduce himself and told her that he lived a blocked way and that he wanted to be friends with her. He explain he saw her since the first day she got to school but was kind of afraid to talk to her. They both went for a walk and went to buy ice cream. Laura felt so happy that she had made a new friend and really cute. " wow this is like a miraclei jsut made a new friend and really cute!!. I connect this when i first go here to the USA, i remeber i had no friends but then i remember my neighbors and i bacame really good friends.. 

Living Fishers!!

It was monday and Laura had a full day of school. As normal she went to lunch and sat on the table where she usally ate with her friends. She was ready to give them a good explanation of why she lied to them. But when their friends came, they tell her to live the table and that she was not their friend no more. Laura got up and was trying to explain to them her reasons and that maybe they could solve the problem. Madly they said that they werent  sure they could fix the problem if religion can not be change. Laura walked away not understanding why can people not be friends or get along becase of the difference in religion." why this happen to me?, i was starting to make good friends and now im starting from the beginning again". I connect this to like how white peole didnt not get along with black people because of their skin color. 

Leaving Fishers

A month had passed Laura had good friends, she got along really well with them. Hollowen was around the corner and Laura`s friends were having a hallowen party but everyone had to dress in a custome and came prepare to tell a scary devil story. Laura got excited for the party but after she heard it was for halloween she felt so dissapointed. She was tought in her religion of Protestan that halloween was not a thing to celebrate or have fun, it was the time when the devil came out to kill innocent people, and there for everyone shoud be praying at their house. The day arrive and her friends ask her if she wanted a ride. Laura nervously didnt how to tell them that she was not going to the party. But she remebered what her mother told her about lying, so bravely she told them that she was not going because she was from another religion and that she apologyze for liying." I remeber my moms words and for much that i wanted to lie i couldnt it was goign to be worse".Her friends with a big shoked on their face just walk away without saying anything.  This reminds me of when my friend lie to her mom, showing her false grades that were not his but at the the end he had to confense the whole thruth. He apologize but i didnt work for his mom to forgive him.